First off the whole concept is just plain creepy, way freakier than most the Mot W episodes on the actual show. Sam and Dean are legitimately out of their depth, starting off with Dean bleeding out and getting worse from there. Neither they nor the reader ever figure out exactly what's going on, giving the whole thing a creepily disorienting feel. I loved the story, but wonders could be done with a little more editing. Parts of the story dragged and it started to get repetitive. This could partly be due to the idea that Sam and Dean are caught in a time loop/hole/thing, but the attempt to convey that killed a lot of the tension. Both the writing and the plot could be tightened up some and this would go from good to stellar. Overall rating 7/10
FanficRecs Creepy, but rambling
First off the whole concept is just plain creepy, way freakier than most the Mot W episodes on the actual show. Sam and Dean are legitimately out of their depth, starting off with Dean bleeding out and getting worse from there. Neither they nor the reader ever figure out exactly what's going on, giving the whole thing a creepily disorienting feel. I loved the story, but wonders could be done with a little more editing. Parts of the story dragged and it started to get repetitive. This could partly be due to the idea that Sam and Dean are caught in a time loop/hole/thing, but the attempt to convey that killed a lot of the tension. Both the writing and the plot could be tightened up some and this would go from good to stellar. Overall rating 7/10